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DESCRIBE A TIME WHEN YOU HELPED A FRIEND

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BEING A NGO MEMBER I HAVE A HABIT TO HELP OTHERS. I ALWAYS HELP TO MY NEAR AND DEAR ONES. NOW I WOULD LIKE TO EXPLAIN THE SITUATION WHEN I HELPED MY BEST FRIEND. ONE WEEK AGO, MY FRIEND TEENA CALLED ME AND SAID THAT HER FATHER WAS ON SERIOUS CONDITION DUE TO MAJOR ACCIDENT. she wanted two bottles of o- blood for her father Unfortunately my blood group is B- and i could not gave my blood to her father. Then I shared this information in whatsapp groups and one of my colleague bobby who has O- blood group and he agreed to gave blood. then i pick him from his home and reached at hospital where her father was admitted. After testing his blood, doctors take my colleague for gave blood to teena's father. After two hours doctor said her father was out of danger. my friend and her mother was very thankful to us. and also try to giving some money to my colleague but he did not take that money for this help. after 3 days doctors discharged his father and now he is very well. I feel very proud for this type of help.

BEING A NGO MEMBER I HAVE A HABIT TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 OTHERS.

I ALWAYS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 TO MY NEAR AND DEAR ONES. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
NOW
 I WOULD LIKE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
EXPLAIN
 THE SITUATION WHEN I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
HELPED
 MY BEST FRIEND.

ONE WEEK AGO, MY FRIEND Possible spelling mistake found.TeenTeensDeenaTeenyTEEN A
TEENA
 CALLED ME AND SAID THAT HER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
FATHER
 WAS ON SERIOUS CONDITION DUE TO MAJOR ACCIDENT.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 wanted two bottles of o- You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
 for her father

Unfortunately my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
 group is B- and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 could not The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "give"give
gave
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
 to her father.

Then I shared this information in Possible spelling mistake found.WhatsAppwhats app
whatsapp
 groups and one of my colleague bobby who has O- You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).group, and
group and
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to gave blood.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 pick him from his home and reached at hospital where her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
was admitted
.

After testing his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
, doctors take my colleague for gave You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
blood
 to Possible spelling mistake found.teenteensDeenateenyteen a
teena
's father.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 two hours doctor said her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 was out of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 friend and her mother was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 thankful to us. and also
 try to Did you mean "give"?give
giving
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money to my colleague This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he did not take that money for this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 3 days doctors discharged his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 proud for this type of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. 