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The proportion of changes in annual spending in UK School between 1981 and 1991 is depleted by two given charge

The proportion of changes in annual spending in UK School between 1981 and 1991 is depleted by two given charge 3M3xJ

In the year 1981 changes in annual spending on Teachers salary it counted for 40% and experience the slightly rise in 1991 as regards to other work and salary it comparison and 28% in 1981 year which decrease 222 % in last year the initial figure for resource example books was 15% and a incline of 5% was observed at the end furniture and equipment which had the proportion of 15% in the beginning of a failed to decline to 5% in date small changes in annual spending on insurance declined by the difference of 1 percentage

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 incline of 5% was observed
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IELTS essay The proportion of changes in annual spending in UK School between 1981 and 1991 is depleted by two given charge

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American English

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