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The progress provides information about the manufacture of electrical energy

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The progress provides information about the manufacture of electrical energy. In general, it can be seen that the factory is starting with combining of coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical processes to construct electricity. Looking at the picture, we can see coal incorporate with oxygen is transported to a furnace. After that, they start the waste – slag and raw syngas process. The procedure which eliminate harmful contaminats includes CO2 mercury and sulphur. In addition, purified gas is used for running a gas turbine connect to a generator and from which the electricity is created. By the other way, the purified gas is also converted to hot exhaust gasses. They pass through the flue gasses manufactory to heat recovery steam generator.
The progress provides information about the manufacture of electrical energy.

In general
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the factory is starting with combining of coal and oxygen and undergoing various chemical processes to construct electricity.

Looking at the picture, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
coal incorporate with oxygen
is transported
to a furnace. After that, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the waste
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
slag and raw
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syngas
process. The procedure which eliminate harmful
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contaminats
includes CO2 mercury and
Possible spelling mistake. 'sulphur' is British English.
sulphur
.
In addition
, purified gas is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for running a gas turbine connect to a generator and from which the electricity
is created
.

By the other way, the purified gas is
also
converted to hot exhaust gasses. They pass through the flue gasses
Possible spelling mistake found.
manufactory
to heat recovery steam generator.
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IELTS essay The progress provides information about the manufacture of electrical energy

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