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are you addicted to smartphone?

are you addicted to smartphone? 2Rwdx

We cannot ignore phones’ drawbacks. Firstly, people, especially the young, tend to have mobile phone with them all the time, which reduce the real connection between people. For instance, if you and your friends hang out at a cafe and one of you keeps using his or her phone constantly, it would be uncomfortable. Besides, the overuse of mobile phone even reduce the efficiency of your study and your work. It is because people are usually attracted by entertainment functions like games, social media, …, which waste a lot of their time. In addition, some types of phone’s screen light can harm your eyes and the radiation from this device is not good for your brain and your health.

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