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The professor gives examples of the effects of elephants on the African grasslands habitat. Using the examples from the talk, explain why elephants v.2

The professor gives examples of the effects of elephants on the African grasslands habitat. Using the examples from the talk, explain why elephants v. 2
Choosing a friend and maintaining that friendship is crucial for staying mentally healthy. Some people believe that partner should accord with them on every single topic, while others view disagreement as beneficial and even constructive in certain situation. This essay will discuss in both way and give my own opinion To begin with, opinions form characters and similar beliefs signify same characters. One of the advantages of having a friend who is same beliefs is that can share hobbies and keep their amity without fretting over quarrel and their grave repercussions For instance, friends who agree that gambling in poker games is ethically unproblematic can spend for long hours together getting pleasure from the games without to worry about pangs of conscience. If these two friends had different stances about poker, they would not able to enjoy the game together. However, discord in friendship is essential for vital decisions in your life. Disagreement can shed light on those aspects of life you are unaware of and this can lead to success. For example, while pondering over immigrating to Canada a couple of years ago. I sought consultant from friends who disagreed with me on dozen of issues. Despite this, I found their suggestion about employment opportunity, practical as they enlightened me about the issues I had neither foreseen on my own or received from friends similar to me in character. Had I not listened to their differing opinions, I would not have been able to find a proper job in such a short time after landing in Canada. In conclusion, there are certainly benefits to having friend who can partake in the same values and opinions as us; To despite this, it is equally important to have a friends who can offer a different perspective on things
Choosing a
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and maintaining that friendship is crucial for staying mentally healthy.
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Some
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believe that partner should accord with them on every single topic, while others view disagreement as beneficial and even constructive in certain situation. This essay will discuss in both way and give my
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own
opinion

To
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with, opinions form characters and similar beliefs signify same characters. One of the advantages of having a
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friend
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is same beliefs is that can share hobbies and
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keep
their amity without fretting over quarrel and their grave repercussions
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that gambling in poker games is
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unproblematic can spend for long hours together getting pleasure from the games without to worry about pangs of conscience. If these two
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had
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different
stances about poker, they would not able to enjoy the game together.

However
, discord in friendship is essential for vital decisions in your life. Disagreement can shed light on those aspects of life you are unaware of and this can lead to success.
For example
, while pondering over immigrating to Canada a couple of years ago. I sought consultant from
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friends
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who
disagreed with me on dozen of issues. Despite this, I found their suggestion about employment opportunity, practical as they enlightened me about the issues I had neither foreseen on my
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own
or received from
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friends
similar to me in character. Had I not listened to their differing opinions, I would not have been able to find a proper job in such a short time after landing in Canada.

In conclusion
, there are
certainly
benefits to having
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can partake in the same values and opinions as us; To despite this, it is
equally
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important
to have a
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can offer a
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perspective on things
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IELTS essay The professor gives examples of the effects of elephants on the African grasslands habitat. Using the examples from the talk, explain why elephants v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
296 words
7.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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