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The professor discusses the advantages of domesticated animals rather than wild ones.

The professor discusses the advantages of domesticated animals rather than wild ones. She describes two kinds. First, a steady and reliable source of meat. Domesticated animals can be easily raised and reproduced. The professor provides an example of goats to illustrate this. Goats can be easily organized and controlled by only one person, and every time we need meat, we can kill one of them. Second they bring us different food. To be more specific from the wild animals we can only get meat but domesticated animals have milk too. We can drink it or preserve it in the shape of yogurt or cheese. And that's how the professor describes the advantages of domesticated animals rather than wild animals.

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