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many people keep dogs and cats as companion.

Dogs and cats can be wonderful company but there are also number of problem which has to face by owner or community. In many of the family pet are treated as a family members they are cared loved as a family members pets are loyal with owner and community they are also helpful in army, police and other many situtaion where because of the dogs the case are solved dogs are usefull for protection and serve as guides for the disebaled people with dogs are not only happier and healthier but may even live longer. Thus the animals benifit individuals and the community. There are also a negative aspects of pets and for community as well. The freedom of the both cats and dogs are restricted. In Australia the owner of the cat has been pressured to keep their pet animals in the homes that they can not harm the birds or other any animals. Dogs can no longer run in park and at the beaches but must be kept an leads these restriction are imposed by the community to protect the public.
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dogs
are restricted
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been pressured
to
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keep
their pet animals in the homes that they can not harm the birds or other any animals.
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IELTS essay many people keep dogs and cats as companion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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