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The process shows the number of stages to be a doctor.

The process shows the number of stages to be a doctor. 6mp6x
The assigned layout provide information regarding system of education which is required to be a doctor. Overall, it is manifested that to become a doctor student have to pass through several stages start with bachelor's degree and ends at receiving of medical licence. Moreover, it is the long term process. At the cursory glance, it is witnessed that if someone want to become a doctor they firstly had to complete a bachelor's degree course of 4 years. Moving further, they can join a medical school for same duration. After that, they had insure an internship program at a hospital of minimum duration 3 and maximum 7 years. Delving deeper, after completion of internship program, student have choice to become a specialist or not. If not, then they just to pass the licensing exam and get a medical licence. However, when they want to become a specialised they have to give 1-3 years in followership and crack the licensing exam to receive a medical licence.
The assigned layout provide information regarding system of education which
is required
to be a doctor.

Overall
, it
is manifested
that to
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become
a doctor student
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have to
pass through several stages
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start
with bachelor's degree and ends at receiving of
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medical
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licence
.
Moreover
, it is the long term process.

At the cursory glance, it
is witnessed
that if someone
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want
to
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become
a doctor they
firstly
had to complete a bachelor's degree course of 4 years. Moving
further
, they can
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join
a
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medical
school for same duration. After that, they had
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insure
an internship program at a hospital of minimum duration 3 and maximum 7 years.

Delving deeper, after completion of internship program, student have choice to
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become
a specialist or not. If not, then they
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just
to pass the licensing exam and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
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medical
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licence
.
However
, when they want to
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become
a
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specialised
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
give 1-3 years in followership and crack the licensing exam to receive a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
medical
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
.
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IELTS essay The process shows the number of stages to be a doctor.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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