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the process of making cherry jam in factory

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The photos show the process of preparing cherry jam. There are nine stages in the cherry jam making process beginning with collecting cherries from trees and ending with labling the cherry jam jars. First, a mecanical hand shaking the tree of cherry and cherries fall to ground then cherries are collected and are transported to the factory by a big truck with their all parts such as it’s leaves. In the next step, the leaves are removed from the cheries and washed by water carefully and then stones are removed from the middle of the fruit by a machine that has a metal lever. Next, the cherries are cooked and some ingredients such as lemon juice, suger and pectin are mixed with it for extra flavor. After the cooking is finished, the cherry jam is ready to be checked by the quality control center. Finally, the cherry jam are poured into plastic or glass jars and a lable stuck on the jars.

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show
 the process of preparing cherry jam.

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cherries
 from trees and ending with Possible spelling mistake found.labelingcablingtablingladlingla blinglab ling
labling
 the cherry jam jars.

First
, a Possible spelling mistake found.mechanical
mecanical
 hand shaking the tree of cherry and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 fall to ground then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and are transported
 to the factory by a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 truck with their all parts such as Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?its
it’s
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leaves
. In the next
 step, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
are removed
 from the Possible spelling mistake found.cherriesCherie
cheries
 and washed by water carefully
 and then stones are removed
 from the middle of the fruit by a machine that has a metal lever. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are cooked
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 ingredients such as lemon juice, Possible spelling mistake found.sugarsuperLugeraugersurerhuger
suger
 and pectin are mixed
 with it for extra flavor. After the cooking is finished
, the cherry jam is ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 by the quality control center. Finally
, the cherry jam are poured
 into plastic or glass jars and a Possible spelling mistake found.labelablecabletableliablefable
lable
 stuck on the jars. 