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People Are Becoming Too Dependent on the Phone and Internet, is it a Positive or a Negative Development?

People Are Becoming Too Dependent on the Phone and Internet, is it a Positive or a Negative Development? p1983
Technology has changed the way we live. From communication, to accomplishing daily tasks and even when it comes to education and learning. With just a click of a button, we can do various tasks all at once and have access to valuable information all over the world. We can pay bills, shop groceries, order deliveries, learn and develop new skills even without leaving the comforts of our home. We can reach out and call someone halfway across the globe while cooking and doing laundry and all at once. Technology made our lives easier and provided a more convenient way of living.
Technology has
changed
the way we
live
. From communication, to accomplishing daily tasks and even when it
comes
to education and learning. With
just
a click of a button, we can do various tasks all at once and have access to valuable information all over the world.

We can pay bills, shop groceries, order deliveries, learn and develop new
skills
even without leaving the comforts of our home. We can reach out and call someone halfway across the globe while cooking and doing laundry and all at once. Technology made our
lives
easier and provided a more convenient way of living.
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IELTS essay People Are Becoming Too Dependent on the Phone and Internet, is it a Positive or a Negative Development?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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