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The process of how fish is canned

The process of how fish is canned 2R5Db

The given pictures illustrate the process of canning fish. As is shown in the process, there are 15 steps in the pictures commencing with pre-canning and terminating in dispatching to the supermarkets. In the first step, fishes are pre-canned and then caught. The fish which is caught are frozen to a temperature -18C. When the fishing vessel reaches the harbor, fish is unloaded from harbor and then weighted. For preparing the fish is thawed. Then some parts of the fish are discarded. The prepared fish is cooked in steam and cool for filleting. After cutting into small pieces, fish is filled into cans and brine water and oil are added. Following this, cans are sealed and sterilized. At this point, cans are labeled and It is moved to the storage section and despatched to the supermarkets

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given
 pictures illustrate the process of canning fish. As is shown
 in the process, there are 15 steps in the pictures commencing with Possible spelling mistake found.recantingpre-openingpre-trainingpretrainingreplanning
pre-canning
 and terminating in dispatching to the supermarkets.

In the first
 step, fishes are Possible spelling mistake found.recantedprecancelpre-dinnerpre-ownedpre-trainedpretrained
pre-canned
 and then caught. The fish which is caught
are frozen
 to a temperature -18C. When the fishing vessel reaches the harbor, fish is unloaded
 from harbor and then weighted. For preparing the fish is thawed
. Then This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 parts of the fish are discarded
. The prepared fish is cooked
 in steam and cool for filleting. After cutting into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces, fish is filled
 into cans and brine water and oil are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Following this, cans are sealed
 and sterilized. At this point, cans are labeled
 and It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the storage section and Do not mix variants of the same word ('despatch' and 'dispatch') within a single text.dispatched
despatched
 to the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsupermarkets.supermarkets!supermarkets?supermarkets:supermarkets,supermarkets;
supermarkets