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The line graph illustrates the figures for people in Australia who were born in various parts of the world over the period from 1976 to 2011.

The line graph illustrates the figures for people in Australia who were born in various parts of the world over the period from 1976 to 2011. gWYk1

The line graph illustrates the figures for people in Australia who were born in various parts of the world over the period from 1976 to 2011. Overall, the number of Australia residents who were born in Asia, other nations and total witnessed an increase, whereas an opposite trend is true for that of people with the origin from UK living in Australia. In the year 1976, there were over 10 million of Australia residents who were born in other nations, which as twice as the figure for people born in Asia. Subsequently, Australia citizens who were born in Asia experienced a significant increase in the number to 15 million. In addition, the figure for Australia residents who came from other nations recorded a considerable decline to around 8 million in 1986, followed by a gradual rise to almost 15 million in 2006 before decreasing slightly in 2011. Meanwhile, the number of Australia residents with the origin from UK in 1976 was highest with nearly 15 million. Surprisingly, the figure for the same aspect dropped dramatically to 5 million in 2011. However, the total figure of Australia citizens with various nationalities started at 23 million before dropping to under 20 million in 1996, followed by a significant increase to 25 million in the year 2011.

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