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It is true that global water resources are decreasing significantly.

It is true that global water resources are decreasing significantly. KlnP0
It is true that global water resources are decreasing significantly. Although there will undoubtedly some harmful consequences on everyone, steps could be taken to solve the potential issues. There is some evidence that causing the lack of water resources. The first reason can be the lack of knowledge of people about water. A lot of people believe that the source of water in this world is infinite and consider water supply as a kind of cheap comodity. Another reason is the rapid grownth in the population that contributing to the water crisis by reducing the amount of water for production and consumption. In addition, the growth in urban and industrial creates many unprecedented demands, which can damage the aquatic ecosystem and sources of water. Finally, many water resources are being depleted because of the lack of replenishment or not replenished properly before being re-used. However, there is strong possibility that all the potential problems can be solved by action. In order to ease the crisis, people need to harm the grownth of various polutions and make used water recyclable with the help of modern technologies. Besides, they can introduce new farming skills such as drip irrigation or use drought-resistant plants to save water. More importantly, people need to acknowledge the vital part of water in their life and and it is considerable for them to change the way they are using water in order to prevent this world from water shortages. In conclusion, althought the lack of water resources can cause more than a dozen of harmful issues, I believed that people can still take steps to mitigate the potential problems.
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resources are decreasing
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harmful consequences on everyone, steps could
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evidence that causing the
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lack
of
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resources. The
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reason can be the
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people
about
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.
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people
believe that the source of
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in this world is infinite and consider
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supply as a kind of
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cheap
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comodity
. Another reason is the rapid
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grownth
in the population that contributing to the
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crisis by reducing the amount of
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for production and consumption.
In addition
, the growth in urban and industrial creates
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many
unprecedented demands, which can damage the aquatic ecosystem and sources of
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.
Finally
,
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resources are
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of replenishment or not replenished
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before
being re-
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the crisis,
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recyclable with the
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of modern technologies.
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, they can introduce new farming
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skills
such as drip irrigation or
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drought-resistant plants to save
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. More
importantly
,
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people
need to acknowledge the vital part of
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water
in their life
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it is considerable for them to
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change
the way they are using
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water
in order to
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prevent
this world from
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shortages.

In conclusion
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resources can cause more than a dozen of harmful issues, I believed that
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can
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take steps to mitigate the potential problems.
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IELTS essay It is true that global water resources are decreasing significantly.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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