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The process of getting a driving licence in the UAE.

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The procedure of getting a driving license in the UAE. First and foremost, if individual want to drive yourself to work so humans need to get a driver's license. In the next step people apply for training card at a driving institute. take a theoretical training class at the driving institute. mankind pass theoretical training class if test is clear then take a road training test at the driving institute if test again. After that, pass road training test. Finally, person get a driver's license so now humanity can drive themselves to work. but pass road training test is not clear then take the test again
The procedure of getting a
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humans need to
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apply for
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card at a
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institute.
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take
a theoretical
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mankind
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theoretical
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then take a road
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at the
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again. After that, pass road
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Finally
, person
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get
a driver's license
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humanity can drive themselves to work.
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pass road
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is not
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IELTS essay The process of getting a driving licence in the UAE.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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