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How to choose your news ?

How to choose your news ? Gr0ne
In this ted talk indicates that how you can select your news. Definitely, in the past siblings, adolescent and grandparents give their news from magazines. Whereas, in nowadays people habitually give their news from internet. A good example of this is that people using blogs and online videos. Nevertheless, people must enhance their knowledge and analyze the news. Additionally, they can cognitive it too. Consistently, if the author or newscaster mentions, it means that the text is carefully written
In this ted talk indicates that how you can select your
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. Definitely, in the past siblings, adolescent and grandparents give their
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news
from magazines.

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from internet. A
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example of this is that
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people
using blogs and online videos.

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must
enhance their knowledge and analyze the
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news
.
Additionally
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can cognitive
it too.
Consistently
, if the author or newscaster mentions, it means that the text is
carefully
written
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IELTS essay How to choose your news ?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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