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the process of cherry jam

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The illustration explains the operation of supplying cherry jam. There are nine steps in the process, beginning with spreading a sheet on the ground and shaking the tree to collect the cherries, and ending with sticking a label on each jar. First, a sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to get the cherries. After that, the cherries are collected and transported by trucks to the processing plant. Next, the leaves and stems are removed. The cherries are washed. The stones are taken out of the middle of the cherries by special machinery. The next stage is to cook cherries with extra ingredients such as lemon juice, sugar, and pectin for extra flavor. Then the quality of the jam is checked by the quality control unit. The accepted part of the cherry jam is put into transparent jars. At last, a label is stuck on the jars.
The illustration
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explains
the operation of supplying cherry jam.

There are nine steps in the process, beginning with spreading a sheet on the ground and shaking the tree to collect the
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cherries
, and ending with sticking a label on each jar.

First
, a sheet
is spread
on the ground and the tree
is shaken
to
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get
the
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cherries
. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are collected
and transported by trucks to the processing plant.
Next
, the
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leaves
and stems
are removed
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are washed
. The stones
are taken
out of the middle of the
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cherries
by special machinery.
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The
next
stage is to cook
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cherries
with extra ingredients such as lemon juice, sugar, and pectin for extra flavor. Then the quality of the jam is
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checked
by the quality control unit. The
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accepted
part of the cherry jam
is put
into transparent jars. At last, a label
is stuck
on the jars.
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IELTS essay the process of cherry jam

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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