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The images are good way of communication . In what extent do you agree or disagree

The images are good way of communication. In what extent 2bN1o
It is irrefutable that, "idees like never before". In this modern era everyone wants to make profit behind this reason many organisations use the images for advertising their products and connecting with people. It is more discussed issue of society in the world whether it is a good change. Advertisements have both positive as well as negative impact. I personally infer that this is a much-needed change. The essay intends to discuss both aspects and offer an opinion in further paragraphs. To embark with the major argument put forward by the supporters of film communication media is that, individuals thinks that everyone goes social in this century so this is a welcome development. Companies can upload their products on internet in the form of short clips or image's in very attractive way which encourages the persons to get it. As results, it may enhance the benefits of the host firm and create a communication between user's and owner. Furthermore, mankind says that photography helps to get the good of products. They can compare products whether they buy. Moreover human being argues that blurbs provide a chance of job. Behind these reasons chunk agreed with the above mentioned subject. In contrast, As "beauty lies in the eye's of beholder"similarly, some sections of society deam that images are not accurate way of link between host and masses. Humankind argues some poor people can not use the latest technologies due to these they can not be able to communicate. To give a good illustration, masses says that if a poor people have an opportunity to work in a company but the organisation arrange an online interview but the poor employer may not be able to attend this and may lose the offer of good earning. In this way it may ruined his future. Secondly, people believe online communication may affect their health. As people know that person's who spent much time on internet or television spoil his eyesight. Because in the banners much brighter colours are used to highlighted their goods. Moreover, the common observed thing is that people losse their original relationship. They goes more social and sometimes they get divorce from their partner just for their social life. To sum up, it is true the films are much effective strategy to communicate with other. The advantages outweigh the cons. Photographs provide a chance to met their loveing one's whether you are not here. So I personally believe that it is good way of communication.
It is irrefutable that,
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idees
like never
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before
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"
. In this modern era everyone wants to
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make
profit behind this reason
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many
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organisations
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use
the images for advertising their
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products
and connecting with
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people
. It is more discussed issue of society in the world whether it is a
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good
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change
. Advertisements have both
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positive
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as well as
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negative
impact. I
personally
infer that this is a much-needed
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change
. The essay intends to discuss both aspects and offer an opinion in
further
paragraphs.

To embark with the major argument put forward by the supporters of film
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communication
media is that, individuals
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thinks
that everyone goes social in this century
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so
this is a welcome development.
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Companies
can upload their
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products
on internet in the form of short clips or image's in
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very
attractive way which encourages the persons to
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get
it. As results, it may enhance the benefits of the host firm and create a
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communication
between user's and owner.
Furthermore
, mankind says that photography
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helps
to
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get
the
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good
of
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products
. They can compare
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products
whether they
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buy
.
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Moreover
human being argues that blurbs provide a chance of job. Behind these reasons chunk
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agreed
with the above mentioned subject.

In contrast
, As
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beauty lies in the eye's of beholder
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similarly
,
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some
sections of society
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deam
that images are not
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accurate
way of link between host and masses. Humankind argues
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some
poor
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people
can not
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use
the latest technologies due to these they can not be able to communicate. To give a
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good
illustration, masses says that if a poor
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people
have an opportunity to work in a
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company
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but
the
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organisation
arrange an online interview
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but
the poor employer may not be able to attend this and may lose the offer of
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good
earning. In this way it may
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ruined
his future.
Secondly
,
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people
believe online
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communication
may affect their health. As
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people
know that person's who spent much time on internet or television spoil his eyesight.
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Because
in the banners much brighter
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colours
are
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used
to highlighted their
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goods
.
Moreover
, the common observed thing is that
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people
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losse
their original relationship. They
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goes
more social and
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sometimes
they
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get
divorce from their partner
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just
for their social life.

To sum up, it is true the films are much effective strategy to communicate with other. The advantages outweigh the cons. Photographs provide a chance to met their
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loveing
one's whether you are not here.
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So
I
personally
believe that it is
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good
way of
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communication
.
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IELTS essay The images are good way of communication. In what extent

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  American English
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413 words
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