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The process illustrates how milk, cream, cheese and butter are produced and packaged for sale to costumers.

The process illustrates how milk, cream, cheese and butter are produced and packaged for sale to costumers. mXxwO

The process illustrates how milk, cream, cheese and butter are produced and packaged for sale to costumers. Overall, this is a man-made linear process with eight main stages that starts with cows grazing and finishes with the sale of dairy products in the supermarket and shops. First of all, cows are fed in the fields and then they are taken to a milking machine twice a day. Secondly, milk is cooled in refrigeration storage. Next, milk is transported to Dairy through a tanker. In the last four stages, once the milk is delivered to the Dairy, it is pastuerized in order to become various dairy products such as cheese, cream and butter. Finally, as soon as the milk and dairy products have been packaged, they are then sent out to supermarkets and shops where they are ready for purchase by consumers.

The process illustrates how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, cream, cheese and butter are produced
 and

packaged for sale to costumers.

Overall
, this is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made linear process with eight main stages that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with

cows grazing and finishes with the sale of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 products in the supermarket and

shops.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, cows are fed
 in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fields, and
fields and
 then they are taken
 to a milking

machine twice a day. Secondly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is cooled
 in refrigeration storage. Next
,

milk is transported
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
Dairy
 through a tanker.

In the last four stages, once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is delivered
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
Dairy
, it is Possible spelling mistake found.pasteurized
pastuerized
 in

order to become various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 products such as cheese, cream and butter.

Finally
, as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdairy farm
dairy
 products have been packaged
, they are

then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 out to supermarkets and shops where they are ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 by

consumers. 