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Write a clear and well organized paragraph explaining your opinion about the relationship between John and Lorraine and Mr. Pignati? State clearly if you think the relationship was appropriate or inappropriate and provide at least three specific reasons for your opinion and connect those reasons to actions from the novel. Be sure to include a clear opening statement of your opinion and a closing sentence. (No citation is required).

Write a clear and well organized paragraph explaining your opinion about the relationship between John and Lorraine and Mr. Pignati? State clearly if you think the relationship was appropriate or inappropriate and provide at least three specific reasons for your opinion and connect those reasons to actions from the novel. Be sure to include a clear opening statement of your opinion and a closing sentence. (No citation is required). kx8qR
In my opinion, this is an appropriate relationship. Three of them had a great time with many emotional moments together. Mr. Pignati, who a lonely old man, have had a "new life" after meet two freshman students, John and Lorraine. Everything started randomly when Lorraine made a call as a joke to Mr. Pignati, one of her neighbor. These young 10th graders have founded things that their family couldn't give them such as his welcome, excitement when they came to his house. Also, no one have bought gifts to them like him (the roller skaters). In addition, we can see that he was a generous and kind-heart man through bobo, he treated a monkey like his child, baby and also his best friend. Unfortunately, he was died because of a heart attack after witnessed many shocked things including: bobo died, his house and precious stuffs such as the Conchetta's dress, his pig collection.
In my opinion, this is an appropriate relationship. Three of them had a great time with
many
emotional moments together. Mr.
Pignati
, who a lonely
old
man
, have had a
"
new life
"
after
meet
two freshman students, John and Lorraine. Everything
started
randomly
when Lorraine made a call as a joke to Mr.
Pignati
, one of her neighbor. These young 10th graders have founded things that their family couldn't give them such as his welcome, excitement when they came to his
house
.
Also
, no one have
bought
gifts to them like him (the roller skaters).
In addition
, we can
see
that he was a generous and kind-heart
man
through
bobo
, he treated a monkey like his child, baby and
also
his best friend. Unfortunately, he was
died
because
of a heart attack after witnessed
many
shocked things including:
bobo
died
, his
house
and precious stuffs such as the
Conchetta
's dress, his pig collection.
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IELTS essay Write a clear and well organized paragraph explaining your opinion about the relationship between John and Lorraine and Mr. Pignati? State clearly if you think the relationship was appropriate or inappropriate and provide at least three specific reasons for your opinion and connect those reasons to actions from the novel. Be sure to include a clear opening statement of your opinion and a closing sentence. (No citation is required).

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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