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Children often eat food that is not good for their health. What should be done to make children stop eating unhealthy food?

Children often eat food that is not good for their health. What should be done to make children stop eating unhealthy food? XyNgg

There are two ways to stop children eating unhealthy food. At first. The older should advise children not to eat unhealthy food that has a bad impact on health. For instance, if the young eat too much candy or fast food, they can become obesity. This proves that eating without control will give people ill health. By contrast, kids are always attracted to sweet and oil food so forbidding them from eating these kinds of food is fairly difficult. Therefore, adults may teach children how to get a balanced diet instead of strictly banning them. Children’s parents may add some vegetables to their meals. This is because a healthy dish will give people, especially kids, more energy and nutrients so that all of them get stronger day by day.

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