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the process how fish canning

the process how fish canning 30g6l

The process indicates how fish canning is made. As can be seen, there are 3 mainly steps, starting with catching fish and ending with distributing fish cans to supermarkets. The first stage of the process begins when people are gone to sea to catch fish and fish are freeze below 18 degrees in the boat. After that, frozen fish are moved factory to weighing and thawed. Then fish are cut off the head and tail before being steam cooking and cooling. Following that, fish are filled full cans with oil or brine water after being filleting fish. Subsequently, the fish cans are sealed, sterilized and labelling. Finally, the fish cans are dispatch to supermarket after being arranging in the storage.

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 to supermarkets.

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cans
 with oil or brine water after being filleting fish. Subsequently
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cans
are sealed
, sterilized and labelling. Finally
, the fish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 are dispatch to supermarket after being arranging in the storage. 