Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Computers are perhaps a marvellous invention of the modern era

Computers are perhaps a marvellous invention of the modern era kxjye

Computers are perhaps a marvellous invention of the modern era and they have already revolutionaries the way we do most of our works. With more powerful processing power and the advancement of artificial intelligence, they will be used in more sophisticated work in the future and we should always be in charge of computers and not let them control us. In the covid era, computers are becoming more and more important. Without a computer, students will have difficulty in learning online, finding documents, and designing powerpoint. Employees have difficulty in working remotely, especially jobs related to information technology, design, . . . In the future, computers will be used to produce more sophisticated software and hardware towards the creation of next-generation computers and robots. They will also be used to alter human DNA structure to erase genetic limitations before we are born. We will be able to explore outer space and reach to distant corners of the universe with the help of powerful computer technology. Finally, future soldiers who would fight deadly battles will be robots and controlled by computers who would bring unfathomable destructions to the world. Since computers have advanced, and is still advancing the human civilisations and made things possible which otherwise would have been unattainable, we can’t progress further without the use of computers. I believe that as long as we control them and use them on our benefits, dependency on computers is not bad. But such dependence should not be so extensive that we would be clueless when they malfunction or act against us. We should be suspicious of their use whenever we find that we don’t have alternatives rather than depending on them. To conclude, the computer is a great tool to aid us and make our life and work simple. But we should always be in charge and have alternatives whenever there is a chance of disaster. In fact, we should always be their master as the inventor and not slave due to our carelessness and over-reliance on their use.

Computers are perhaps a Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.marvelous
marvellous
 invention of the modern Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).era, and
era and
 they have already revolutionaries the way we do most of our works. With more powerful processing power and the advancement of artificial intelligence, they will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in more sophisticated work in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).future, and
future and
 we should always be in charge of computers and not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them control us.

In the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
 era, computers are becoming more and more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. Without a computer, students will have difficulty in learning online, finding documents, and designing Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
powerpoint
. Employees have difficulty in working remotely
, especially
 jobs related to information technology, designDid you just mean "," or "."?,.
, .
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.


In the future, computers will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to produce more sophisticated software and hardware towards the creation of next
-generation computers and robots. They will also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to alter human DNA structure to erase genetic limitations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 we are born
. We will be able to explore outer space and reach to distant corners of the universe with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of powerful computer technology. Finally
, future soldiers who would fight deadly battles will be robots and controlled by computers who would bring unfathomable Possible spelling mistake found.destructiondestruct ions
destructions
 to the world.

Since computers have advanced, and is still
 advancing the human Possible spelling mistake. 'civilisations' is British English.civilizations
civilisations
 and made things possible which otherwise
 would have been unattainable, we can’t progress further
 without the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of computers. I believe that as long as we control them and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them on our benefits, dependency on computers is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 such dependence should not be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 extensive that we would be clueless when they malfunction or act against us. We should be suspicious of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 whenever we find that we don’t have alternatives rather
 than depending on them.

To conclude
, the computer is a great tool to aid us and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our life and work simple. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 we should always be in charge and have alternatives whenever there is a chance of disaster. In fact, we should always be their master as the inventor and not slave due to our carelessness and over-reliance on their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 