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The problem when you live in the countryside

The problem when you live in the countryside BwrL6

Firstly, Shopping is quite an inconvenience. There are not many shops in the countryside so we have to go far away to buy stuff that we need. Besides that, It's very hard for us to connect to the Internet there, not only slow but also often go down and somewhere couldn't have Internet even. Another reason is that we couldn't find the jobs which we need and unemployment is quite common. Life in the countryside is not very convenient.

Firstly
, Shopping is quite an inconvenience. There are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 shops in the countryside This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go far away to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 stuff that we need. Besides
 that, It's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for us to connect to the Internet there, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 slow This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go down and somewhere couldn't have Internet even. Another reason is that we couldn't find the jobs which we need and unemployment is quite common.

Life in the countryside is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient. 