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The Earth population has been growing quickly over past few countries and this contribute to a variety of environmental problem.what is good to solve this problem.

The Earth population has been growing quickly over past few countries and this contribute to a variety of environmental problem. what is good to solve this problem. gWdN1
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurage in the number of people believing that earth population has been increased quickly above the parivius in some nation and this help to various kind of in natural coins. There is a wide range of impacts that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken. To commence with, there are myriad consequences of this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that when the population would be increased then would use natural source at high level. it can not only contribute to deplete natural resources, but also leads to numerous other catastrophic effect in various fields such as they would use huge amount of source for produce anargy which spread the lot of dangerous gases in atmosphere as a result the climate would be changed of environment. For instance, the study result published by the government of Australia in March 2016 and April 2018 clear indicate that growing population give the biggest cause of climate change. Needless to say, all these demerits have reaching impacts on society. The steps to deal with this problem are many. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated, but profitable and accessible. The primary one lies in i the effect that higher authorities had better enact stringent rules and regulations to tackle this issue by they should grow the trees as well as give education related to environment. Besides, the government should organize awareness campus to educated people about environment problem due to growing population only when concurrent effects from both sectors are ensured, this problem can be overcome. To conclude, dealing with environment problem due to growing population is one of the most prevelent issues that far almost countries of the world today. Although, it can be alleviated by collective efforts, its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
One of the most conspicuous trends of
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today
’s world is a colossal
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upsurage
in the number of
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people
believing that earth
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population
has
been increased
quickly
above the
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parivius
in
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some
nation and this
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help
to various kind of in natural coins. There is a wide range of impacts that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can
be remedied
provided
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some
effective measures
are taken
.

To commence with, there are myriad consequences of this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that when the
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population
would
be increased
then would
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use
natural source at high level.
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it
can not
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only
contribute to deplete natural resources,
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but
also
leads to numerous other catastrophic effect in various fields such as they would
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use
huge amount of source for produce
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anargy
which spread the lot of
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dangerous
gases in atmosphere
as a result
the climate would be
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changed
of
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environment
.
For instance
, the study result published by the
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government
of Australia in March 2016 and April 2018
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clear
indicate that growing
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population
give the biggest cause of climate
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change
. Needless to say, all these demerits have reaching impacts on society.

The steps to deal with this
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problem
are
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many
. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated,
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but
profitable and accessible.
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The
primary one lies in i the effect that higher authorities had better enact stringent
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rules
and regulations to tackle this issue by they should grow the trees
as well
as give education related to
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environment
.
Besides
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should organize awareness campus to educated
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people
about
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environment
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problem
due to growing
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population
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only
when concurrent effects from both sectors
are ensured
, this
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problem
can
be overcome
.

To conclude
, dealing with
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environment
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problem
due to growing
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population
is one of the most
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prevelent
issues that far almost countries of the world
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today
. Although, it can
be alleviated
by collective efforts, its potential impact is
indeed
too dire to
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ignore
.
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IELTS essay The Earth population has been growing quickly over past few countries and this contribute to a variety of environmental problem. what is good to solve this problem.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.0
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