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The problem about the plant and animal

The problem about the plant and animal 7LOb3
Loss of particular gene or species of plants and animals is the most significant problem of environmental in many countries. The money was used to solve this situation. In the contrary we can correct that. Many countries called my country has the most of species of plants and animal in the world because rain forest in Thailand it has numerous of animal and plants that can be used in the research as well as that can share to many countries in the world and the government does not talk to the deforest that is the main problem. However, it will use a lot of money to spend for research and solve this situation. For example, the government in my country need the research to show off other countries. that is not have budget for the research. On the contrary, money was used for weapons and gun instead develop the technology about species that is not use in the research as well as the main problem is people cutting the tree because if people cutting the tree they will use many tool for cut and truck was used in this situation too that make plant cannot grow and animals do not have residence. In summary, the labor was cutting because they do not have chance to do other work as well as they do not have more knowledge of species of plants and animals. Consequently, the main problem that make the environmental problem is problem and knowledge. However it depends on people and community that they live.
Loss of particular gene or species of
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plants
and
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animals
is the most significant
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problem
of environmental in
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many
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countries
. The money was
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used
to solve this situation. In the contrary we can correct that.

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Many
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countries
called my
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country
has the
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most of species
of
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plants
and
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animal
in the world
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because
rain forest in Thailand it has numerous of
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animal
and
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plants
that can be
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used
in the
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research
as well
as that can share to
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many
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countries
in the world and the
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government
does not talk to
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'deforest' is correct. If 'deforest' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the deforest
that is
the main
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problem
.
However
, it will
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use
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a lot of
money to spend for
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research
and solve this situation.

For example
, the
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government
in my
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country
need the
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research
to
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show
off other
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countries
.
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that
is not
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have
budget for the
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research
.
On the contrary
, money was
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used
for weapons and gun
instead
develop the technology about species
that is
not
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use
in the
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research
as well
as the main
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problem
is
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people
cutting the tree
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because
if
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people
cutting the tree they will
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use
Possible agreement error. The noun tool seems to be countable; consider using: "many tools".
many tool
for
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cut
and truck was
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used
in this situation
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too that
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make
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plant
cannot grow and
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animals
do not have residence.

In summary, the labor was cutting
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because
they do not have chance to do other work
as well
as they do not have more knowledge of species of
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plants
and
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animals
.
Consequently
, the main
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problem
that
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make
the environmental
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problem
is
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problem
and knowledge.
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However
it depends on
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people
and community that they
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live
.
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IELTS essay The problem about the plant and animal

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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