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The invention of internet has had negative effects on us. Do you agree or disagree ?

The invention of internet has had negative effects on us. Nyq7W
In this teach savy era, a plethora of people believe that internet is inavitable part of human life, I think in the reverse manner and strongly disagree to the given divulgence. My inclination, backed by my stance is justified in the subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, out of the squabble the predominant one to prove my view is a very helpful for educational purpose. Owing to that in the current scenario, education are available only online base. A good example for to epitome: the google meat, the zoom online meeting and many more platform. Apart from this, it is also true that internet maintain data of not only banking sector but also commercial. By this I mean, transection and deal can very fast and easy for the world. Furthermore, global communication is very possible by investion of internet. However, I would not overlook the other side too. The mainspring with, money frauds. In lights of the fact that online transaction frauds. What is more, unethical hacking of personal data by black hacker. Thus to conjecture the topic, it can be commented that not only education but also banking department, as well as conversation in national and international level are logically acceptable to advocate my prospective.
In this teach
savy
era, a plethora of
people
believe that internet is
inavitable
part of human life, I
think
in the reverse manner and
strongly
disagree to the
given
divulgence
. My inclination, backed by my stance
is justified
in the subsequent paragraphs.

To embark with, out of the squabble the predominant one to prove my view is a
very
helpful for educational purpose. Owing to that in the
current
scenario, education are available
only
online base. A
good
example for to epitome: the
google
meat, the zoom online meeting and
many
more platform. Apart from this, it is
also
true
that internet maintain
data of not
only
banking sector
but
also
commercial. By this I mean,
transection
and deal can
very
fast
and easy for the world.
Furthermore
, global communication is
very
possible by
investion
of internet.

However
, I would not overlook the other side too. The mainspring with, money frauds. In lights of the fact that online transaction frauds.
What is more
, unethical hacking of personal data by black hacker.

Thus
to conjecture the topic, it can
be commented
that not
only
education
but
also
banking department,
as well
as conversation in national and international level are
logically
acceptable to advocate my prospective.
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IELTS essay The invention of internet has had negative effects on us.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
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