Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The popularity of English

The popularity of English oxJgK
In these day and age, languages play a vital role in each citizen’s life in terms of global communication and interaction. Some languages that are all-too-often underestimated and misunderstood include: English. Though, in countries such as the United States, English has become a widespread language in the world. English is becoming more popular among many people around the world, with translations of Harry Potter novels to be consumed in 25 different languages. In North America there are over 500 million people speaking English natively and for this reason certain areas have become heavily populated by speakers of it. The United States, the United Kingdom, Ireland and most of the Commonwealth nations speak English as a primary language and is at least one of its official languages. The United States has over 30 million people that speak English as a second language. Therefore, it comes as no surprise that this country is considered to be the most linguistically diverse country in the world. Canada and America share a strong bond through common literature and history as well as having both countries similar cultures. Canada has also derived from Great Britain many years ago, making their similarities even more obvious. English has become an international language which is no surprise since it is the most used language in the world. English literature, traditions, laws and most notably languages are shared through this language that shares a lot of similarities with French, Spanish and Portuguese. Because of this fact, there are many languages that are derived from English. The most common languages among these are Germanic languages such as British English, American English and Australian English. Similarly, they also speak Germanic languages such as German. Being a European country for over 800 years now does make them familiar with English. However Spanish is related to French by belonging to the Romance group of languages which means that both of them have similarities with Latin as well as many others.
In
Did you mean "this day" or "these days"?
these day
and age,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
play a vital role in each citizen’s life in terms of global communication and interaction.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
that are all-too-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
underestimated and misunderstood include: English. Though, in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
such as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
States, English has become a widespread
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in the world.

English is becoming more popular among
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world, with translations of Harry Potter novels to
be consumed
in 25
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. In North America there are over 500 million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
speaking English
natively
and
for this reason
certain areas have become
heavily
populated by speakers of it.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
States, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
Kingdom, Ireland and most of the Commonwealth nations speak English as a primary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and is at least one of its official
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
United
States has over 30 million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
that speak English as a second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Therefore
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
as no surprise that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
is considered
to be the most
linguistically
diverse
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
in the world. Canada and America share a strong bond through common literature and history
as well
as having both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
similar cultures. Canada has
also
derived from Great Britain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
years ago, making their similarities even more obvious.

English has become an international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
which is no surprise since it is the most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in the world. English literature, traditions, laws and most
notably
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
are shared
through this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
that shares
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
similarities with French, Spanish and Portuguese.

Because of this
fact, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
that
are derived
from English. The most common
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
among these are Germanic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
such as British English, American English and Australian English.
Similarly
, they
also
speak Germanic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
such as German. Being a European
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
for over 800 years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
does
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them familiar with English.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
Spanish
is related
to French by belonging to the Romance group of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
which means that both of them have similarities with Latin
Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.
as well as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
others.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The popularity of English

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
326 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts