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THE PLASTIC MONEY HAS REPLACED CURRENCY NOTES, AND NOW IT IS ALL ABOUT ONLINE TRANSATIONS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE MONEY TRASATIONS.

THE PLASTIC MONEY HAS REPLACED CURRENCY NOTES, AND NOW IT IS ALL ABOUT ONLINE TRANSATIONS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE MONEY TRASATIONS. ApGx3
TIME IS CHANGING DRASTACILLY NOW DAYS, PEOPLE ARE MOVING TOWARD PLASTIC CURRENCY RATHER ON STAING ON PAPER CURRENCY ON THE CONTRARY, IT'S QUIT EASY TO HANDEL THE PAPER NOTES. THE PAPER NOTES GET SOME TEARS WHEN THEY ARE FOLDED, ON THE CONTRARY THE PLASTIC NOTES ARE EASY TO HENDEL. LIKE SUCH AS WHEN I WAS KID I SAW MY FATHER ONLY THAT WHEN HE USE TO KEEP THE NOTE CURRENCY HE ALWAYS SOME ISSUES WITH IT. PAPER NOTES ARE MADE BY PAPER AND PAPER ARE MADE BY TREE SO THERE IS DISADVANTAGES OF PAPER NOTE, NO THE OTHER SIDE PLATIC NOTES ARE MADE BY PLATIC WHICH ARE RECYCLED AFTER SOME TIME. THERE ARE SOME COUNTRIES THAT THEY ARE USING PLASTIC CURRENCY RANTHER THEN PAPER NOT CURRRENCY. LIKE CANADA USE PLASTIC CURRENCY WHEREAS INDIA USE PAPER NOTES. NOW DAY PEOPLE ARE HAVING INTERNET ON THERE PHONE BY WHICH THEY CAN EASILY MAKE PAYMENT WHERE THEY WANT. LIKE IF THEY ARE IN SHOPING MALL AND THEY SOMETING AND THEY WANT IT TO BUY. BY DOING ONLINE TRACSTION THEY CAN EASILY BUY THAT STUFF.
TIME IS CHANGING
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DRASTACILLY
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NOW
DAYS,
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PEOPLE
ARE MOVING TOWARD
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PLASTIC
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CURRENCY
RATHER
ON
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STAING
ON PAPER
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CURRENCY
ON THE CONTRARY
, IT'S QUIT EASY TO HANDEL THE PAPER NOTES. THE PAPER NOTES
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GET
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SOME
TEARS WHEN THEY
ARE FOLDED
,
ON THE CONTRARY
THE
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PLASTIC
NOTES ARE EASY TO
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HENDEL
. LIKE SUCH AS WHEN I WAS KID I
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SAW
MY FATHER
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ONLY
THAT WHEN HE
Make sure that 'USE TO' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
USE TO
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KEEP
THE
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NOTE
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CURRENCY
HE ALWAYS
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SOME
ISSUES WITH IT. PAPER NOTES
ARE MADE
BY PAPER AND PAPER
ARE MADE
BY TREE
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SO
Did you mean "THERE are DISADVANTAGES"?
THERE IS DISADVANTAGES
OF PAPER
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NOTE
,
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
NO
THE OTHER SIDE
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PLATIC
NOTES
ARE MADE
BY
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PLATIC
WHICH
ARE RECYCLED
AFTER
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SOME
TIME. THERE ARE
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SOME
COUNTRIES THAT THEY ARE USING
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PLASTIC
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CURRENCY
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RANTHER
THEN PAPER NOT
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CURRRENCY
. LIKE CANADA
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USE
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PLASTIC
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CURRENCY
WHEREAS INDIA
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USE
PAPER NOTES.
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NOW
DAY
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PEOPLE
ARE HAVING INTERNET ON
Did you mean "their"?
THERE
PHONE BY WHICH THEY CAN
EASILY
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MAKE
PAYMENT WHERE THEY WANT. LIKE IF THEY ARE IN
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SHOPING
MALL AND THEY
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SOMETING
AND THEY WANT IT TO
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BUY
. BY DOING ONLINE
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TRACSTION
THEY CAN
EASILY
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BUY
THAT STUFF.

IELTS essay THE PLASTIC MONEY HAS REPLACED CURRENCY NOTES, AND NOW IT IS ALL ABOUT ONLINE TRANSATIONS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE MONEY TRASATIONS.

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