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THE PLASTIC MONEY HAS REPLACED CURRENCY NOTES, AND NOW IT IS ALL ABOUT ONLINE TRANSATIONS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE MONEY TRASATIONS.

THE PLASTIC MONEY HAS REPLACED CURRENCY NOTES, AND NOW IT IS ALL ABOUT ONLINE TRANSATIONS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE MONEY TRASATIONS. ApGx3

TIME IS CHANGING DRASTACILLY NOW DAYS, PEOPLE ARE MOVING TOWARD PLASTIC CURRENCY RATHER ON STAING ON PAPER CURRENCY ON THE CONTRARY, IT'S QUIT EASY TO HANDEL THE PAPER NOTES. THE PAPER NOTES GET SOME TEARS WHEN THEY ARE FOLDED, ON THE CONTRARY THE PLASTIC NOTES ARE EASY TO HENDEL. LIKE SUCH AS WHEN I WAS KID I SAW MY FATHER ONLY THAT WHEN HE USE TO KEEP THE NOTE CURRENCY HE ALWAYS SOME ISSUES WITH IT. PAPER NOTES ARE MADE BY PAPER AND PAPER ARE MADE BY TREE SO THERE IS DISADVANTAGES OF PAPER NOTE, NO THE OTHER SIDE PLATIC NOTES ARE MADE BY PLATIC WHICH ARE RECYCLED AFTER SOME TIME. THERE ARE SOME COUNTRIES THAT THEY ARE USING PLASTIC CURRENCY RANTHER THEN PAPER NOT CURRRENCY. LIKE CANADA USE PLASTIC CURRENCY WHEREAS INDIA USE PAPER NOTES. NOW DAY PEOPLE ARE HAVING INTERNET ON THERE PHONE BY WHICH THEY CAN EASILY MAKE PAYMENT WHERE THEY WANT. LIKE IF THEY ARE IN SHOPING MALL AND THEY SOMETING AND THEY WANT IT TO BUY. BY DOING ONLINE TRACSTION THEY CAN EASILY BUY THAT STUFF.

TIME IS CHANGING Possible spelling mistake found.Drastically
DRASTACILLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
NOW
 DAYS, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 ARE MOVING TOWARD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
PLASTIC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcash
CURRENCY
RATHER
 ON Possible spelling mistake found.StatingStringStayingStagingStainSting
STAING
 ON PAPER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcash
CURRENCY
ON THE CONTRARY
, IT'S QUIT EASY TO HANDEL THE PAPER NOTES. THE PAPER NOTES This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
GET
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 TEARS WHEN THEY ARE FOLDED
, ON THE CONTRARY
 THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
PLASTIC
 NOTES ARE EASY TO Possible spelling mistake found.HandelMendelHEN DELHenkel
HENDEL
. LIKE SUCH AS WHEN I WAS KID I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SAW
 MY FATHER This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
ONLY
 THAT WHEN HE Make sure that 'USE TO' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".Used to
USE TO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
KEEP
 THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharactertonesign
NOTE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcash
CURRENCY
 HE ALWAYS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 ISSUES WITH IT. PAPER NOTES ARE MADE
 BY PAPER AND PAPER ARE MADE
 BY TREE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
Did you mean "THERE are DISADVANTAGES"?THERE are DISADVANTAGES
THERE IS DISADVANTAGES
 OF PAPER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharactertonesign
NOTE
, Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?Now
NO
 THE OTHER SIDE Possible spelling mistake found.PlasticPLA TIC
PLATIC
 NOTES ARE MADE
 BY Possible spelling mistake found.PlasticPLA TIC
PLATIC
 WHICH ARE RECYCLED
 AFTER This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 TIME. THERE ARE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 COUNTRIES THAT THEY ARE USING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
PLASTIC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcash
CURRENCY
Possible spelling mistake found.RatherPantherRancherAntherRanterRANT HER
RANTHER
 THEN PAPER NOT Possible spelling mistake found.Currency
CURRRENCY
. LIKE CANADA This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
USE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
PLASTIC
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcash
CURRENCY
 WHEREAS INDIA This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
USE
 PAPER NOTES. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
NOW
 DAY This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 ARE HAVING INTERNET ON Did you mean "their"?Their
THERE
 PHONE BY WHICH THEY CAN EASILY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 PAYMENT WHERE THEY WANT. LIKE IF THEY ARE IN Possible spelling mistake found.HopingShoppingShowingShapingSlopingShoving
SHOPING
 MALL AND THEY Possible spelling mistake found.Something
SOMETING
 AND THEY WANT IT TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
. BY DOING ONLINE Possible spelling mistake found.Traction
TRACSTION
 THEY CAN EASILY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
 THAT STUFF. 