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How did yo avoid the challenging position in your life

How did yo avoid the challenging position in your life k5kAK

Life includes happiness, sadness, barriers troubles and many problems. Everyone undergoes problems there would not be any exception. I am the person who had to fight against feelings. This was somewhat tough for a painfully shy girl. I did not use to come out of my shell and loved being alone. Low self esteem always made me emotional wreck. I was not interested in studying, making news, a little peace was enough for me. It was very boring to live. Fortunately, one day my mother offered me to attend English course and I went there unwillingly. However, my first result of test was the highest mark in the class. I was increasingly surprised because I had never learn anyting about English. I was blissfully happy with that. From that time I began to believe myself. I realized I could reach anything I wanted if I tried. My horizon was broadened. I never stop to thank my parents and my teacher for my achievements.

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many
 problems. Everyone undergoes problems there would not be any exception.

I am the person who had to fight against feelings. This was somewhat tough for a painfully
 shy girl. I did not Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
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come
 out of my shell and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 being alone. Low This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-esteem
self esteem
 always made me emotional wreck. I was not interested in studying, making news, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 peace was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for me. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 boring to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. Fortunately
, one day my mother offered me to attend English course and I went there unwillingly
. However
, my first
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test
 was the highest mark in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. I was increasingly
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because
 I had never Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "learned", "learnt".learnedlearnt
learn
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anyting
 about English. I was blissfully
 happy with that. From that time I began to believe myself. I realized I could reach anything I wanted if I tried. My horizon was broadened
. I never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 to thank my parents and my teacher for my achievements. 