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A Person Who I Admire most

A Person Who I Admire most ApG5N

There are various people that I admired in my life. If I have to choose the person who I admire most, I would choose Teacher Su. She is one of the famous English teachers in Myanmar and also the owner of “Teacher Su Language Centre”. She is an adorable, youthful lady. She has long black hair and wears glasses. Whenever she smiles, she is really cute and cheerful. She is kind, brave and beautiful. She is not only attractive at teaching but also good-looking. Moreover, she likes sharing her knowledge and experience to her students. When I don't understand the lessons, she always explains clearly. She supports excellent and studious students, for example, giving scholarships. The reason why I admire her is she is generous, patient and open-minded. She is one of my greatest benefactresses of my life and one of the people that I might never forget, indeed.

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, she likes sharing her knowledge and experience to her students. When I don't understand the lessons, she always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
clearly
. She supports excellent and studious students, for example
, giving scholarships. The reason why I admire her is she is generous, patient and open-minded. She is one of my greatest benefactresses of my life and one of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 that I might never forget, indeed
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