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The plans below shows the village of Pebbleton twenty years ago and now

The plans below shows the village of Pebbleton twenty years ago and now gGnD3
The illustrations below give the information about variety of changes that take place within Pebbleton over the course of 20 years. Overall, the crucial change is the existence of new bridge that have the function connect both mainlands. Moreover, there are diversity of modern facilities are applied well after 20 years. The land around Coast Road have no change obviously. Currently, by building up a new Footbridge, the transportation seems flexible and convenient than in the past. The Film studio is demolished to make a way for new Flats in Southern West of Pebbleton, which leads to the various entertainment sites are constructed around. Such as Tennis courts on the Lighthouse lane, the Community centre which locates between a numerous block of Northern houses and Children’s playground which is the replacement of the Old Fort 20 years before. There are many construction still remain unchanged in the certain place like Lighthouse in the top corner of Pebbleton. More facilities are erected over the given period; however, that is not effect on the amount of tree along two main road, which create the well-balanced between the accommodation and environment of this popular town.
The illustrations below give the information about variety of
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changes
that take place within
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Pebbleton
over the course of 20 years.

Overall
, the crucial
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change
is the existence of new bridge that have the function connect both mainlands.
Moreover
, there are diversity of modern facilities
are applied
well after 20 years.

The land around Coast Road have no
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change
obviously
.
Currently
, by building up a new Footbridge, the transportation seems flexible and
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convenient
than in the past. The Film studio
is demolished
to
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make
a way for new Flats in Southern West of
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Pebbleton
, which leads to the various entertainment sites
are constructed
around. Such as Tennis courts on the Lighthouse lane, the Community
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centre
which locates between a numerous block of Northern
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houses
and Children’s playground which is the replacement of the
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Old
Fort 20 years
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before
. There are
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many construction
still
remain unchanged in the certain place like Lighthouse in the top corner of
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Pebbleton
. More facilities
are erected
over the
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given
period;
however
,
that is
not
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effect
on the amount of tree along two main road, which create the well-balanced between the accommodation and environment of this popular town.
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IELTS essay The plans below shows the village of Pebbleton twenty years ago and now

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