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Some people think that main responsibility of companies is to look after their employees. Others think that customers. Describe both point of views.

Some people think that main responsibility of companies is to look after their employees. Others think that customers. Describe both point of views. 5bwbN
Corporate social responsibility refers to the moral and ethical efforts made by a company for the betterment of society in some way. There are customer-centric companies or employee-centric ones. I will look at both points of view and analyze them. Firstly, let us look at the company, which focuses more on its workers. Ensuring fair labor practices for employees means that there will be no gender, race, or religious discrimination among the employees and each employee will be given equal pay for equal work and better living wage compensation. The company focuses more on employees put them first in conflict situations and cannot be objective about the reason for the problem. Most companies like this will have difficulties with customers if they do not treat well them. Furthermore, it is essential to listen to customers’ opinions about the quality of products and service not only employees’; after all, people will decide whether to buy or not based on it. On the other hand, customer-centric companies will have a clear understanding of people’s needs and work toward a satisfactory level of their product or service. In the past, customers were only limited to only a handful of brands to choose from. Today, the business space is far more open and competitive, leaving the average customer to be spoiled for choice. With the level of competition among brands to outdo each other, more brands turn to be a more customer-centric organizations to stay relevant. To conclude, We live in a globalized world where advanced technologies have made our social networking easier than ever. In today’s world, there is no place for selfishness and greed. To achieve long-term sustainability and success, we have to work mutually and look after each other’s needs. And in this process, we will eventually benefit ourselves.
Corporate social responsibility refers to the moral and ethical efforts made by a
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company
for the betterment of society in
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some
way. There are customer-centric
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companies
or employee-centric ones. I will look at both points of view and analyze them.

Firstly
,
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let
us look at the
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company
, which focuses more on its workers. Ensuring
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fair
labor practices for
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employees
means that there will be no gender, race, or religious discrimination among the
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employees
and each
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employee
will be
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given
equal pay for equal work and better living wage compensation. The
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company
focuses more on
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employees
put them
first
in conflict situations and cannot be objective about the reason for the problem. Most
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companies
like this will have difficulties with
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customers
if they do not treat well them.
Furthermore
, it is essential to listen to
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customers’
opinions about the quality of products and service not
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only
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employees’
;
after all
,
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people
will decide whether to
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buy
or not based on it.

On the other hand
, customer-centric
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companies
will have a
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clear
understanding of
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people
’s needs and work toward a satisfactory level of their product or service. In the past,
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customers
were
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only
limited to
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only
a handful of brands to choose from.
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Today
, the business space is far more open and competitive, leaving the average
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customer
to
be spoiled
for choice. With the level of competition among brands to outdo each other, more brands turn to be a more customer-centric organizations to stay relevant.

To conclude
, We
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live
in a globalized world where advanced technologies have made our social networking easier than ever. In
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today
’s world, there is no place for selfishness and greed. To achieve long-term sustainability and success, we
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have to
work
mutually
and look after each other’s needs. And in this process, we will
eventually
benefit ourselves.
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IELTS essay Some people think that main responsibility of companies is to look after their employees. Others think that customers. Describe both point of views.

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