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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given two layout shows the university sports centre at present time and another shows the future plans and changes in university sports centre. The present university sports centre layout shows there are two outdoor courts. Between the two outdoor courts large area is occupied by sports and other things. There is reception in the entrance. North of the reception there is 25 m swimming pool. West of the pool area is changing room and East area is for seating. There is a gym to the north of the swimming pool. There are so many new things are added in future plans layout of university sports centre. Firstly, the area bigger in future layout then the present. Reception is in the north of the entrance. In the West of the entrance there is sports shop in the west of sports shop there is changing room and leisure pool is in north to the changing room which is in west to the sports shop. In the east of entrance there is a cafe and in the east of cafe there is another changing room. In the north of reception there is 25 m swimming pool. In the west of pool there is changing room and seating area is located in the east of it. Gym is located in the north of the swimming pool which is large in size than present context. There is dance studio is added in future layout which are located together by side in the north of changing room which is east of the cafe. In the west of a pool there is seating area and the west of the seating big new sports hall will made in future. In short, many new things will be added according to the future plans layout of university sports centre.
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layout
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there are two outdoor courts. Between the two outdoor courts large
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area
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sports
and other things. There is
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reception
in the
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entrance
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North
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reception
there is 25 m swimming
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pool
. West of the
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and East
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seating
. There is a gym to the
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new things are
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plans
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layout
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university
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sports
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layout
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then
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present
.
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is in the
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north
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entrance
. In the West of the
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entrance
there is
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sports
shop in the west of
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shop there is
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changing
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room
and leisure
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pool
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north
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changing
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room
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shop. In the east of
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entrance
there is a
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and in the east of
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there is another
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the
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reception
there is 25 m swimming
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pool
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seating
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area
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north
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large in size
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room
which is east of the
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. In the west of a
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seating
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In short,
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IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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4 paragraphs
300 words
5.0
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