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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where where relevant.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. K72w
The pictures show Grand Public Park at the time of opening in 1920 and today. Overall, many new additional things have been developed like café and parking whereas, fewer attractions are unchanged for example entrance and one Rose garden. In the past, there were three Rose Gardens distributed in three corners of the park on the contrary today two of them are cloud at center part of the park between two entrance. All the seats are around the central Rose garden in spite of the fact that they were distributed throughout the park near the boundary of the park. In 1920, when it was opened there were two water attractions one fountain and a pond for water plants at center and right top corner respectively. However, in this day and age only one water feature is available in the right bottom corner of the park. Additionally, the stage for musicians was replaced by amphitheater for concerts with sitting arrangements for the audience. The children's play area was design instead the glasshouse but at different location. To avail parking for visitors Underground car park was constructed and for public Café was also open next to top entrance Gate.
The pictures
show
Grand Public
Park
at the time of opening in 1920 and
today
.

Overall
,
many
new additional things have
been developed
like café and parking whereas, fewer attractions
are unchanged
for example
entrance and one Rose garden.

In the past, there were three Rose Gardens distributed in three corners of the
park
on the contrary
today
two of them are cloud at center part of the
park
between two entrance. All the seats are around the central Rose garden
in spite of
the fact that they
were distributed
throughout the
park
near the boundary of the park.

In 1920, when it
was opened
there were two water attractions one fountain and a pond for water plants at center and right top corner
respectively
.
However
, in this day and age
only
one water feature is available in the right bottom corner of the
park
.
Additionally
, the stage for musicians
was replaced
by amphitheater for concerts with sitting arrangements for the audience. The children's play area was design
instead
the glasshouse
but
at
different
location. To avail parking for visitors Underground car
park
was constructed
and for public Café was
also
open
next
to top entrance Gate.
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IELTS essay The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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