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Relation to others is a kind of software ability of people, while knowledge is more like a hardware ability of people. As for students who cannot make sure which sort of job he/she will take, the best way to succeed is studying hard in school and making connections and relations to society after graduation. In an interview, the interviewer, after all, will not give you an offer according to the number of your friends. From my perspective, the software ability largely depends on hardware ability. Everyone has his/her circle. If you want to make friends with competent people, you must be one of them. If you work hard in the school library every day, you are more likely to make friends with hard-working students like you. A student who always stays in a dormitory playing computer games all the time, like males always do, will not meet a girlfriend in college, because a girl will never show up in his dormitory! What is more, no matter how well you relate to your circle, once your level of ability goes much beyond the average level of your circle, you will feel hard to obtain common sense among your friends. It is because you are speaking different languages now. Great minds think alike. Your relation scope will keep changing since you keep learning new things in school and in a future job. When you keep outrunning your old self, you will find you have outrun most friends of your circle! I strongly believe that students should focus more on their studies in school. That is what school education is meant to be, and that is where a successful career is waiting. As an old Chinese saying goes, there is no need to worry about no friends ahead of you, since you have been recognized by people all over the world.
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ability
of
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people
, while knowledge is more like a hardware
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ability
of
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people
. As for
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students
who cannot
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make
sure which sort of job he/she will take, the best way to succeed is studying
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hard
in
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school
and making connections and relations to society after graduation. In an interview, the interviewer,
after all
, will not give you an offer according to the number of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
. From my perspective, the software
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ability
largely
depends on hardware ability.

Everyone has his/her circle. If you want to
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make
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friends
with competent
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people
, you
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must
be one of them. If you work
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hard
in the
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school
library every day, you are more likely to
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make
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friends
with
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hard
-working
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students
like you. A
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student
who always stays in a dormitory playing computer games all the time, like males always do, will not
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meet
a girlfriend in college,
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because
a girl will never
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show
up in his dormitory!

What is more
, no matter how well you relate to your circle, once your level of
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ability
goes much beyond the average level of your circle, you will feel
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hard
to obtain common sense among your
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friends
. It is
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because
you are speaking
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different
languages
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now
. Great minds
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think
alike. Your relation scope will
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keep
changing since you
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keep
learning new things in
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school
and in a future job. When you
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keep
outrunning your
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old
self, you will find you have outrun most
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friends
of your circle!

I
strongly
believe that
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students
should focus more on their studies in
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school
.
That is
what
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school
education
is meant
to be, and
that is
where a successful career is waiting. As an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
Chinese saying goes, there is no need to worry about no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
ahead of you, since you have
been recognized
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
all over the world.
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IELTS essay genetically modified trees

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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