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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. 6eoG

The plans illustrates Grange Park in 1920, when it opened and today The park connects Eldon street with Arnold avenue and has 2 entrances to each of them. Modern park has one more entrance, it's underground car park entrance. There was a fountain, but now there is a rose garden, surrounded with 4 seats in the center of park. On the left of Eldon street entrance there was stage for musicians and on the right was Glasshouse. In contemporary park stage of musicians was replaced with amphitheatre and glasshouse with water feature. Today there is an are for children and cafe opposite the water feature, although at the first time there was pond and rose garden.

The plans You should probably use "illustrate".illustrate
illustrates
 Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 in 1920, when it opened and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today


The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 connectsPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Eldon street with Arnold avenue and has 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 to each of them.

Modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has one more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
, it'sPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
. There was a fountain, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 there is a rose garden, surrounded with 4 seats in the center of park.

On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of Eldon street You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 there was stage for musiciansPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
and on the right was Glasshouse. In contemporary parkPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
stage of musicians was replaced
 with Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
andPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
glasshousePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
with water feature. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 there isPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Did you mean "and are"?and are
an are
 for children and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 oppositePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
the water feature, although at the first
 time there was pond and rose garden. 