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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contribu the to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contribu the to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? p9R3
Work is one of the most significant aspect that assist to the people to be rich life style. However, l think that wellbeing job should be very major object to living for two main areas. Firstly, in this period there are many works in the worldwide such as builder, solicitor and so one. Moreover, in case that people should get the job, the authority will make a place of job for them so that individuals would do the work with a strive. If individuals ought to not keep up with work like other modernized countries' employers and than they should not dream about the pay. But the workers ought to do something smartly. Because there are many profits of smart work. For instance, employer would not lost and spend their gold time for other minor objects.
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to be rich life style.
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job should be
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, in this period there are
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many
works in the worldwide such as builder, solicitor and
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one.
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people
should
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get
the job, the authority will
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make
a place of job for them
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so
that individuals would do the
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work
with
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a strive
. If individuals ought to not
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keep
up with
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work
like other modernized countries' employers and
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than
they should not dream about the pay.
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But
the workers ought to do something
smartly
.
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there are
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many
profits of smart
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work
.
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, employer would not
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lost
and spend their gold time for other minor objects.

IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contribu the to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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