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the place of origin and time of entering the English language; its meaning; the story behind the word (either true or fake).

the place of origin and time of entering the English language; its meaning; the story behind the word (either true or fake). MqPrL
I have read this article twice, but I didn`t like it. Honestly, it is awful. I knew some of these stories about words. For example word "bug" - is my professional slang and I learned that story at a University. Can you imagine a computer, that was like a house in size! And one man who checked hundreds of bulbs trying to find the reason for the problem? And as a result, there was a small insect! Such a beautiful story! But the article says that it is not true! I feel like a child, who has known that there are no Santa Clauses. . . Maybe only one story in life was funnier than in our belief - the story about "Pumpernickel".
I have read this article twice,
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bug
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is my professional slang and I learned that
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at a University. Can you imagine a computer, that was like a
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house
in size! And one
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man
who
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checked
hundreds of bulbs trying to find the reason for the problem? And
as a result
, there was a
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small
insect! Such a
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beautiful
story!

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But
the article says that it is not true! I feel like a child, who has known that there are no Santa Clauses.
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in life was funnier than in our belief
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the
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about
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Pumpernickel
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IELTS essay the place of origin and time of entering the English language; its meaning; the story behind the word (either true or fake).

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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