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the crimes come due to social and financial problems or because of individual personalities

the crimes come due to social and financial problems or because of individual personalities AJ9a1

regardless that some people believe that social and financial problems are the primary players behind acting crimes, others argue that it is not the case but a person's personality is. I firmly advocate the latter view. On the one hand it not hidden fact that some people think what is causing crimes is society and financial problems. if, say, a father who earns decent amount of income to support his family loses that he will likely ending up doing illegal actions such as stealing other properties.

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 believe that social and financial problems are the primary players behind acting crimes, others argue that it is not the case This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 a person's personality is. I firmly
 advocate the latter view. On the one hand it not hidden fact that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 what is causing crimes is society and financial problems. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
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, say, a father who earns decent amount of income to support his family loses that he will likely ending up doing illegal actions such as stealing other properties. 