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The pictures illustrate the process of hydroelectric power station, to generate electricity from the river to national grid in 4 steps.

The pictures illustrate the process of hydroelectric power station, to generate electricity from the river to national grid in 4 steps. 73adk
The pictures illustrate the process of hydroelectric power station, to generate electricity from the river to national grid in 4 steps. In general, in the first stage, water from the river dammed into a high level reservoir, after several processes, electricity is produced. To begin, electricity production starts with the water that is dammed from the river to make a high level reservoir, so the water can flowed into the generator through the pipe that being opened by day. Subsequently, the water moved the generator by reversible turbines during the day, and the the water flows into low level reservoir. After the turbines stirred by the water, it operates the generator to produce electricity and distributed by power lines into national grid. Once the day is over, in the night, water flowed back from low level reservoir to spin the turbines in order to pump water into high level reservoir.
The pictures illustrate the process of hydroelectric power station, to generate
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electricity
from the river to national grid in 4 steps.

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, in the
first
stage,
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water
from the river dammed into a high
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level
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reservoir
, after several processes,
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electricity
is produced
.

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begin
,
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electricity
production
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starts
with the
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water
that
is dammed
from the river to
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make
a high
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level
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reservoir
,
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so
the
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water
can flowed into the generator through the pipe that
being opened
by day.
Subsequently
, the
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water
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moved
the generator by reversible turbines during the day, and
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the the
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water
flows into low
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level
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reservoir
. After the turbines stirred by the
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water
, it operates the generator to produce
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electricity
and distributed by power lines into national grid.

Once the day is over, in the night,
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water
flowed back from low
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level
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reservoir
to spin the turbines in order to pump
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water
into high
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level
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reservoir
.
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IELTS essay The pictures illustrate the process of hydroelectric power station, to generate electricity from the river to national grid in 4 steps.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
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