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The picture illustrates the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power station.

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The picture illustrates the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power station. In general, water is collected from a river to the dam, then the current of water will be generated to produce electricity. To begin, electricity production in the hydroelectric power station starts with water from a river being accumulated in the dam which open at the day to intake the current of water to the generating station. Subsequently, the generator will operate as the current of water turns the turbine, followed by the production of electricity. Afterwards, the electricity is delivered to power lines and to national grid to provide electricity to people around nation. When at night, the turbines of generator pump water into high-lever reservoir so the water come out from the generating station and the dam. After it comes out from the dam, the dam is closed and will be opened at day on the next morning.
The picture illustrates the process of
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electricity
generation in a hydroelectric power station.

In general
,
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water
is collected
from a river to the
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dam
, then the
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current
of
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water
will
be generated
to produce electricity.

To
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begin
,
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electricity
production in the hydroelectric power station
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starts
with
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water
from a river
being accumulated
in the
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dam
which open at the day to intake the
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current
of
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water
to the generating station.
Subsequently
, the generator will operate as the
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current
of
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water
turns the turbine, followed by the production of electricity.

Afterwards, the
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electricity
is delivered
to power lines and to national grid to provide
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electricity
to
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people
around nation. When at night, the turbines of generator pump
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water
into high-lever reservoir
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so
the
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water
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come
out from the generating station and the
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dam
. After it
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comes
out from the
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dam
, the
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dam
is closed
and will
be opened
at day on the
next
morning.

IELTS essay The picture illustrates the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power station.

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153 words
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