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Choose ONE of the following topics to write a descriptive paragraph( at least 200 words) to describe the place below

Choose ONE of the following topics to write a descriptive paragraph( at least 200 words) to describe the place below gW5Rg
A clear sky appears before the viewer's eyes when looking at the picture. The sky is strangely blue with light yellow rays in the early morning on the countryside. The air is fresh and cool, the glittering dew drops on the rice leaves are like beautiful little pearls The image of the grain-laden rice fields makes me imagine the gentle breeze passing through the rice grains creating a fragrance. faintly, characteristic smell of ripe rice. A flock of white storks spread their wings and flew over, striking against the deep blue sky. There are times when farmers go to work, the fields are full of songs and songs. Each flock of colorful butterflies seems to play with the green rice carpet. In the season when the rice is in full bloom, if anyone stands in the distance, looking back, they will see a vast golden sea. Scattered throughout the field are scenes of farmers reaping rice, white hats bobbing in the field. Looking at all the scenery in the rice fields, I find those images so dear. It was a very peaceful scene where there was no rush of people or the noise of traffic. A passionate love for the homeland arose in my heart
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before
the viewer's eyes when looking at the picture. The sky is
strangely
blue with light yellow rays in the early morning on the countryside. The air is fresh and cool, the glittering dew drops on the
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rice
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leaves
are like
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beautiful
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little
pearls The image of the grain-laden
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rice
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fields
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makes
me imagine the gentle breeze passing through the
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rice
grains creating a fragrance.
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faintly
, characteristic smell of ripe
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rice
. A flock of white storks spread their wings and flew over, striking against the deep blue sky. There are times when farmers go to work, the
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fields
are full of songs and songs. Each flock of colorful butterflies seems to play with the green
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rice
carpet. In the season when the
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rice
is in full bloom, if anyone stands in the distance, looking back, they will
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see
a vast golden sea. Scattered throughout the
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field
are scenes of farmers reaping
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rice
, white hats bobbing in the
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field
. Looking at all the scenery in the
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rice
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fields
, I find those images
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so
dear. It was a
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very
peaceful scene where there was no rush of
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people
or the noise of traffic. A passionate
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love
for the homeland arose in my
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heart

IELTS essay Choose ONE of the following topics to write a descriptive paragraph( at least 200 words) to describe the place below

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
204 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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