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The table give illustrates about polling the student for services in an university. The survey do in every five years start from 2000 until 2010. Electronics resources have increase of number every five year start from 45 percent until 88 percent this depending advance of technology it make the people easily give polling from electronic resources. Thisi is different with range of mudules offered the percentages is decrease avery five year start from 32 percent until 27 percent. the building or learn facilities have same percentages every five years the value is 77 percent. about teaching quality and print resources have fluctuative number. Start from 65 percent then going down to 63 percent and group up until 69 percent it is for teaching quality. It different with print resources the value in 87 percent then grow up until 89 percent in 2005 and decrease 1 percent in 2010. In conclution, electronics resources have increase percentages in every five year and range of modules offered have decrease percentages in every 5 years.
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IELTS essay polling percentages at university

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
171 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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