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The pictures describe the various steps involved in constructing an igloo.

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The pictures describe the various steps involved in constructing an igloo. Overall, the whole procedure consists of 13 steps, starting with finding hard-packed snow and finishing when cutting ventilation holes in the wall and roof. To begin with, using a snow saw, blocks are cut in hard-packed snow. Large blocks are used for the base. Then, the edges of the blocks are smoothed and placed to form the circle. After that, an entrance is made by digging a hole under the circular wall. The last opening on the top is filled by a large block, carefully cut to the exact size. Concurrently, snow is thrown on the igloo and packed into all the crevices or gaps. Inside the igloo, the walls are smoothed by hand. Next, the entrance is built and the hole is covered with snow blocks. Finally, ventilation holes which allow air to enter are cut in the wall and roof, and the igloo is finished.
The pictures
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the various steps involved in constructing an igloo.

Overall
, the whole procedure consists of 13 steps, starting with finding
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hard
-packed
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snow
and finishing when cutting ventilation
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holes
in the
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wall
and roof.

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begin
with, using a
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snow
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saw
,
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blocks
are
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cut
in
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hard
-packed
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snow
. Large
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blocks
are
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used
for the base. Then, the edges of the
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blocks
are smoothed
and placed to form the circle. After that, an entrance
is made
by digging a
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hole
under the circular
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wall
. The last opening on the top
is filled
by a large
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block
,
carefully
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cut
to the exact size.

Concurrently
,
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snow
is thrown
on the igloo and packed into all the crevices or gaps. Inside the igloo, the
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walls
are smoothed
by hand.
Next
, the entrance
is built
and the
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hole
is covered
with
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snow
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blocks
.
Finally
, ventilation
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holes
which
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allow
air to enter are
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cut
in the
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wall
and roof, and the igloo
is finished
.

IELTS essay The pictures describe the various steps involved in constructing an igloo.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
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