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Spain is a wonderful country

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I want to visit Spain soon. I would love to see some tremendous tourist destinations in that multicultural country, such as Catalonia and La Mancha. In addition to that, it will be a great chance to taste Spanish recipes, including Patatas bravas, Jamón, and Churros. Spain is a developed country situated in southwestern Europe. It is famous for its wonderful scenery and beautiful sightseeing, especially the beaches in coastal areas. In regard to the climate in Spain, that country enjoys a fine climate, cold in winter, moderate in spring, and hot in summer. Spain is a beautiful country.
I want to visit Spain
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, such as Catalonia and La
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Patatas
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situated in southwestern Europe. It is
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for its wonderful scenery and
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sightseeing,
especially
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enjoys a fine climate,
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in winter, moderate in spring, and hot in summer. Spain is a
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IELTS essay Spain is a wonderful country

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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