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The pictures depict the evolution of town Tennyson from 1990 to present day.

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The pictures depict the evolution of town Tennyson from 1990 to present day. Overall, it is clear that there are few major changes in Tennyson, the place has transformed into a city from a town. It can be seen as a fully grown place with an airport, factory and new railways. Few places in the East part of the town remained constant like the Hospital, the railway station, the school and few residential houses with a parking space. Over the years, a new airport has been constructed at the northwest corner of the school plot. Besides, a factory can also be seen at the southern east part of the town which lead to removal of many trees and houses. We can observe that the west side of the town has completely transformed into a residential area, many new buildings have been constructed along with a new supermarket for the residents and a few houses were demolished. A new railway line is built on the southern part of the town connecting the two sides divided by the river. With time, the town now also has a ferry.
The pictures depict the evolution of
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Tennyson from 1990 to present day.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are few major
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changes
in Tennyson, the place has transformed into a city from a
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town
. It can be
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seen
as a
fully
grown place with an airport, factory and
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new
railways.

Few places in the East part of the
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town
remained constant like the Hospital, the railway station, the school and few residential
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houses
with a parking space. Over the years, a
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new
airport has
been constructed
at the northwest corner of the school plot.
Besides
, a factory can
also
be
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seen
at the southern east part of the
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town
which lead to removal of
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many
trees and
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houses
.

We can observe that the west side of the
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town
has completely transformed into a residential area,
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many
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new
buildings have
been constructed
along with a
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new
supermarket for the residents and a few
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houses
were demolished
. A
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new
railway line
is built
on the southern part of the
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town
connecting the two sides divided by the river. With time, the
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town
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now
also
has a ferry.
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IELTS essay The pictures depict the evolution of town Tennyson from 1990 to present day.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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