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do you under the stress for a long time ?

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I think that all of us are under the stress at least one time. For me, being a student, I know the period of time that we have to concentrate all my head for the final exams is really a nightmare. Sometimes, I can not sleep a wink, I must spend all my night doing my homework. I have considerable white night and I feel worse when the deadline is ever-increasing. I have to suffer intense pressure thus there are many times I sit in the corner and cry. I have to burn the midnight oil to cram into abundant knowledge from 13 official subjects. Therefore, the next day, I do not have enough energy to deal with a great deal of the present that the lift gives me.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that all of us are under the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 at least one time. For me, being a student, I know the period of time that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 concentrate all my head for the final exams is really
 a nightmare. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
, I can not sleep a wink, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 spend all my night doing my homework. I have considerable white night and I feel worse when the deadline is ever-increasing. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 suffer intense pressure thus
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times I sit in the corner and cry. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 burn the midnight oil to cram into abundant knowledge from 13 official subjects. Therefore
, the next
 day, I do not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 energy to deal with a great deal of the present that the lift gives me. 

IELTS essay do you under the stress for a long time?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

129 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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