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The pictures demonstrates the process of preparing cherry jam

The pictures demonstrates the process of preparing cherry jam ldld9

The pictures demonstrates the process of preparing cherry jam. There are nine main stages in the process of making cherry jam. The process begins with the three is shaken and finishes when the label is stuck on the jars. First of all, sheet is spread on the ground and the three is shaken. Then the cherries are collected and transported to the processing plant. After that, the stems and leaves are removed. Next the cherries are washed. The next stage is to the stone is take out of the middle of the cherry by equipment which is made of metal spike. after that

The pictures You should probably use "demonstrate".demonstrate
demonstrates
 the process of preparing cherry jam. There are nine main stages in the process of making cherry jam. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with the three is shaken
 and finishes when the label is stuck
 on the jars.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, sheet is spread
 on the ground and the three is shaken
. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and transported to the processing plant. After that, the stems and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
are removed
. Next
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
. The next
 stage is to the stone is take out of the middle of the cherry by equipment which is made
 of metal spike. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that