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Describe an electric item that is important to you

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Nowadays, especially in this fourth industrial revolution, one of the most important things each of us needs to have with us is nothing but a smartphone. This is one of the most integral electronic devices for me, it supports me not only in entertainment but also in studying, especially while online learning is extremely common in this Covid-19-spreading situation. It gives us access to huge resources of information on the internet to help our study become easier than before. Besides the help in studying, a smartphone can also help you to entertain yourself, watching videos on Youtube make you feel relaxed after hard working hours, you can also use many social media platform such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc. . . to connect with your friends, you family and furthermore. My smartphone is step by step becoming my friend.

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