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Describe a job you would like to have.

Describe a job you would like to have. APVJX
My dream career is as a tour guide. A tour guide is someone who uses a chosen language to introduce and explain to visitors the cultural and natural heritage of different countries. Tour guide is a dynamic discipline. Tour guides need to prepare extensive knowledge of geography, history, culture, people, cuisine, etc. of Vietnam as well as other countries in the world. We must have good communication skills, flexible and polite behavior. And we also need to have skills in organizing and managing tours. An indispensable thing if you want to succeed in this industry is a foreign language. This is considered a mandatory requirement for any guide who wishes to enter this profession. The job of a guide is very interesting. The tour guide industry will give me the opportunity to expand my horizons, explore new lands, new cultures, luxurious architecture, etc. Since then, I have had the same way of adapting to new environments and to all situations. Traveling was one of my hobbies when I was a kid and becoming a tour guide is a way for me to fulfill my hobby. I really enjoy this job and I will try my best to achieve my dream by all means.
My dream career is as a
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. A
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is someone who
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uses
a chosen language to introduce and
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explain
to visitors the cultural and natural heritage of
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different
countries.

Tour
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guide
is a dynamic discipline.

Tour
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guides
need to prepare extensive knowledge of geography, history, culture,
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people
, cuisine, etc. of Vietnam
as well
as other countries in the world. We
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must
have
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good
communication
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skills
, flexible and polite behavior. And we
also
need to have
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skills
in organizing and managing
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tours
. An indispensable thing if you want to succeed in this industry is a foreign language. This
is considered
a mandatory requirement for any
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guide
who wishes to enter this profession.

The job of a
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guide
is
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very
interesting.

The
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tour
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guide
industry will give me the opportunity to expand my horizons, explore new lands, new cultures, luxurious architecture, etc. Since then, I have had the same way of adapting to new environments and to all situations. Traveling was one of my hobbies when I was a kid and becoming a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
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guide
is a way for me to fulfill my hobby. I
really
enjoy this job and I will try my best to achieve my dream by all means.
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IELTS essay Describe a job you would like to have.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
203 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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